User:LegoMagneto/Group transfer reaction/Kekekandy Peer Review

General info
LegoMagneto, User19228, Audiolosh
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Sandbox Draft
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Group transfer reaction

Evaluate the drafted changes
- original article has very little content, so good job adding more to it!

- I would add a citation to the first paragraph in your sandbox. I see it is directly from the original article so just add the citation from there

- "A defining feature of the group transfer reaction is that it is a concerted reaction in which a bond is broken and formed within one step" Is there any way to use Brogan teachings to make this sentence more straight forward? it gets wordy at the bolded part

- be careful using "this" and "they" as subjects, try to make it more detailed of what you are actually referring to

- I think it would be smart to divide the ene reactions into subgroups of what you listed. you can do a brief summary of them all and link to their own individual articles if they have any because the "ene reactions" section is rather small for being the most common one

- everything looks great! where you are planning to put figures would be really beneficial for understanding