User:LegoMagneto/Group transfer reaction/SarahRundle Peer Review

General info
LegoMagneto, User19228, Audiolosh
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:LegoMagneto/Group transfer reaction
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Group transfer reaction:

Evaluate the drafted changes
First paragraph:

-Either provide a hyperlink or define what a pericyclic reaction is

-Remove "sometimes" from the beginning of the second sentence

-Add hyperlinks for pi bonds and sigma bonds

-Either define Woodward-Hoffman Rules or add a hyperlink

-I like the division of the reaction into two types, followed by both of those types being explained.

-I think adding a reaction mechanism to this section is a good idea

Ene Reaction:

- create a hyperlink for alkene, or define what it is.

-add hyperlinks for homonuclear and heteronuclear

-I think adding figures, again, is a good idea. A visual of the mechanism will help with the overall understanding of the article.

* For your title I would capitalize each word (Group Transfer Reaction)

Diimide:

-add a hyperlink for alkyne

-add a hyperlink for organic synthesis

** In general any time you use a term relevant to chemistry/the article that you do not explicitly define, I would add a hyperlink. This would help for those who the view article that are not necessarily a part of the expert audience.