User:LegoOrchid/The Frogs/Meegleague Peer Review

General info
LegoOrchid
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:LegoOrchid/The Frogs
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):The Frogs

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead- looks really good! my only suggestion would be to maybe add another citation earlier on in the paragraph, even if it's to the same source you cite at the end, just to ensure that all info is accounted for.

Article body- same advice as above! your writing looks good, but I would definitely add more sources, especially with how long the section is. Something that i'm really focusing on for my article is just piece by piece googling information and trying to find an academic, peer reviewed source that discusses it, and if you can't cut it out of the article. Looks really good otherwise! :)