User:LehmanGirlMD/Literacy/Literacystudent Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LehmanGirlMD


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:LehmanGirlMD/Literacy
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/courses/Lehman_College,_CUNY/Language_and_Literacy_Acquisition_and_Development_(Fall_2022)/students/articles/LehmanGirlMD
 * https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/courses/Lehman_College,_CUNY/Language_and_Literacy_Acquisition_and_Development_(Fall_2022)/students/articles/LehmanGirlMD

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * - If the article is about the effects of socio economic status of children's literacy ability, then yes what I read is relevant. If the article was about literacy and a broad definition of it, then the article needs to be refined for relvancy
 * - The article does a well just at remaining neutral.
 * - There is only one article cited, which means more sources are needed
 * - Make sure you include your sources in the reference sections.
 * - Make sure you include your sources in the reference sections.