User:Leilakinson/Bog body/Anthro Lover Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Leilakinson)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Bog body
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bog body (same one)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article has an even balanced structure in each sectional paragraph as well as well articulated and reliable sources, as my fellow classmate adds more to the article it will only improve as I know that there are many reliable sources from our class that can be used to further improve this article. Adding links as well as media images will also help support the topic of this article while providing evidence. I suggest continuing the clear structure presented in this original article, in terms of chronological order as well as a division of certain topics for their own respected paragraphs. The neutral content presented here is something I will have to add to my own article.