User:Lejohn1381/Urban sociology/Meganob Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username) Lejohn1381
 * Link to draft you're reviewing

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Yes but my partner and I added a new lead.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? No we added a new intro.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? Yes
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Based on the original, it needs a little more detail.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? No

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? Some of it seems biased, but it is almost impossible to make any of the work unbiased to some degree.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? Overrepresented.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? It mostly just discussed the history.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes
 * Are the sources current? Yes, some are.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yes

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Well written, but there are some unnecessary wording.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? A very few amount.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Yes, it brings in new insight.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? The new qualities and topics are strong because it brings out other unbiased views. Also, it is broken down more and easier to read.
 * How can the content added be improved? Maybe try to find more sources and connections to all of the topics.