User:LemonExtractor/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Code talker
 * The article's content is relevant to the topic and is written in a neutral tone. There is room for improvement in certain sections that are only one or two sentences long. All but few claims have a citation; all of the citations I checked come from good sources. The topic of the article directly tackles the equity gaps of numerous historically underrepresented cultures and languages. There is only one post on the article's talk page, and it didn't produce any useful conversation.
 * About Assiniboine code talkers:
 * https://www.greatfallstribune.com/story/news/2014/01/05/code-talker/4311455/
 * About Mohawk code talkers:
 * https://teachingsocialstudies.org/2020/02/17/new-york-states-mohawk-code-talkers/
 * About Assiniboine code talkers:
 * https://www.greatfallstribune.com/story/news/2014/01/05/code-talker/4311455/
 * About Mohawk code talkers:
 * https://teachingsocialstudies.org/2020/02/17/new-york-states-mohawk-code-talkers/

Option 2

 * Herculine Barbin
 * The article's content is relevant but lacking. There is room for more detail, primarily in the "Puberty" section. The tone is neutral. There are few sources, but the ones in use appear reliable. The topic of the article directly tackles the equity gap of intersex individuals. There has been productive discussion in the talk page revolving around Herculine Barbin's tricky use of pronouns.
 * About intersex history:
 * https://www.proquest.com/openview/3bbdfcddf0e5728cc1ba395215d6f259/1?pq-origsite=gscholar&cbl=18750
 * About intersex history:
 * https://www.proquest.com/openview/3bbdfcddf0e5728cc1ba395215d6f259/1?pq-origsite=gscholar&cbl=18750
 * About intersex history:
 * https://www.proquest.com/openview/3bbdfcddf0e5728cc1ba395215d6f259/1?pq-origsite=gscholar&cbl=18750

Option 3

 * Crown Colony of Penang
 * The article's content is relevant but exceptionally sparse, amounting to one full paragraph. There is room for much more relevant information regarding the Crown Colony of Penang's mode of government. The tone is neutral. The citations are evenly spread out, but, again, there is not much pertinent information in use within this article. The topic of the article directly tackles the equity gap of colonized peoples in Southeast Asia. There is only one post on the article's talk page, and it didn't produce any useful conversation.
 * About the Crown Colony of Penang's government/history:
 * https://www.britannica.com/place/Straits-Settlements
 * About the Crown Colony of Penang's government/history:
 * https://www.britannica.com/place/Straits-Settlements
 * About the Crown Colony of Penang's government/history:
 * https://www.britannica.com/place/Straits-Settlements

Option 4

 * LGBT Rights in Ceará
 * The article's content is relevant but exceptionally sparse, amounting to one sentence. There is room for improvement on about every level. The tone is neutral. There are citations in use, but it is preferable to find supplementary sources. The topic of the article directly tackles the equity gap of LGBT people, especially as they exist in Brazil. There is no activity in the talk page.
 * About sex education laws in Ceará:
 * https://www.hrw.org/report/2022/05/12/i-became-scared-was-their-goal/efforts-ban-gender-and-sexuality-education-brazil
 * About sex education laws in Ceará:
 * https://www.hrw.org/report/2022/05/12/i-became-scared-was-their-goal/efforts-ban-gender-and-sexuality-education-brazil
 * About sex education laws in Ceará:
 * https://www.hrw.org/report/2022/05/12/i-became-scared-was-their-goal/efforts-ban-gender-and-sexuality-education-brazil

Option 5

 * Yuhanna al-Armani
 * The article's content is relevant but exceptionally sparse, amounting to two very short paragraphs. Additionally, the writing quality can be improved. The tone is neutral. There are citations in use, but it us preferable to find supplementary sources. The topic of the article directly tackles the equity gap of historical figures from the Middle East. There is no activity on the talk page.
 * About Yuhanna al-Armani's works:
 * https://academic.oup.com/cairo-scholarship-online/book/23144/chapter-abstract/184012325?redirectedFrom=fulltext
 * About Yuhanna al-Armani's works:
 * https://academic.oup.com/cairo-scholarship-online/book/23144/chapter-abstract/184012325?redirectedFrom=fulltext
 * About Yuhanna al-Armani's works:
 * https://academic.oup.com/cairo-scholarship-online/book/23144/chapter-abstract/184012325?redirectedFrom=fulltext