User:LemonLimeHerbal/sandbox/Snow298 Peer Review

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LemonLimeHerbal
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 * User:LemonLimeHerbal/sandbox
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 * Lactose synthase

Evaluate the drafted changes
The added information about maintaining a sequential order is clear, concise, and grammatically correct. The content is added in a reasonable and proper place: after the description of the binding and conformational change, since it clarifies the order of events. The editor did a good job identifying relevant information in the context of what previous editors have added and describing the research in a way that is easy to understand.

The use of the word "important" may be make the tone less neutral, so maybe the wording can be changed to "A sequential order is needed...". For the previous parts of the article, I would also add Wikipedia links to alpha-lactalbumin, as well as other molecules, each time it is mentioned throughout the essay.

The sources are all verifiable and from credible research studies. The sources are from 1999-2002, perhaps due to lack of research in the area since then. Future editors can also contribute additional information based on investigations that may not be primarily focused on lactose synthase, but still mention it. Since the information is all currently in the Lead, future editors can also develop the article to include more sections, move more detailed information into the sections, and update the Lead summary.