User:Lemonnsamm/Bethany Yellowtail/AYen3013 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lemonnsamm


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lemonnsamm/Bethany Yellowtail


 * Lead section Content

The content are relevant. However, needs more information.

Tone and Balance

Tone is neutral and not biased


 * Sources and References

lacking citation and references within the article.


 * Organization

Recommend a chronological approach.


 * Images and Media

No photos available yet. Recommend adding external link to a photo.



Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)