User:Lenabean2023/Digital native/KachowMater Peer Review

I see that you added three resources to use as citations on your bibliography. The second citation is a reliable source and also corrected linked on the article. On your first citation (Selwyn, Neil) on the article which matches your first citation on the bibliography you created, it links to a different article on Wikipedia: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Internet and that page says it needs reliable sources, so I am unsure that is a reliable source. The third item on your bibliography though is not in correct APA format. It includes an order number which should be removed. I look forward to see all you do on this!

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