User:Lenaerickson/Takydromus amurensis/Trouter123 Peer Review

The effects of climate change have influenced the health, strength, and embryo fitness of Takydromus amurensi. Temperature warming can prominently affect the embryo survival rates and biodiversity of these lizards. The incubation period for this species was significantly affected by the climate conditions: eggs incubated in the warmer climate hatched 8.1 days earlier than those in present climate conditions. Also, the hatchlings incubated under warming climates had higher survival rates than the siblings incubated under present climates (Liu et. al). Moreover, the effects of climate warming on biodiversity were negative: T. amurensi was found to have the highest net habitat loss with warming climate, as well as the greatest decrease in habitat stability (Mi et. al).

There is no lead sentence, which should be included to show the realm of what this information fits in. I think "Response of T. amurensi to warming temperature" would be appropriate. Content is relevant to lizard responses and adaptations to warming temperatures. Sources show content is based in fact, but the citations are formatted incorrectly, should be (Author Year). Content is neutral. This contribution will help the overall article because it gives more background on how these lizards may be responding to impending climate change.

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