User:LeoAHearl/Sanitary engineering/Emmayoun9 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LeoAHearl


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LeoAHearl/Sanitary_engineering?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sanitary engineering

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think Leo's article is off to a good start. Everything so far is backed up by reliable sources and is unbiased, he just needs to add more. Adding more real-life examples to portray his already existing points would be helpful. I talked to Leo about how he will expand his article, and he says he will compare the US sanitary engineering system to other countries. He will expand on the practices of the US sanitary engineering system in general. I think with those changes, if he keeps using reliable and unbiased sources, he will be on the right track.