User:Leonardlauryn/Ecological niche/Lbothwe Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lauryn Leonard


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Leonardlauryn/Ecological niche


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ecological niche

Evaluate the drafted changes
I appreciate that you summarized the highlights and listed possible room for changes. And I agree that the Hutchinsonian niche section is unproportionally detailed in comparison to the other two, so there is an imbalance there. Iw ould focus on bulking up the other two perspectives with similar support. The material present seems unbiased enough, and factual.

I think there is an opportunity to possible incorporate more graphics and images, if you come across any interesting as you research your additional edits.

It's helpful that even in the lead, there is already a mention of biogeography, so that helps tie our studies back into the article and assignment.

Looking through the references, they are primarily literature-based with a couple respected online resources so I consider those sufficient. Our textbook is actually referenced a few times.

I saw you added a citation for a statement describing the definition of an Eltonian niche, so that's helpful in providing in support. Otherwise it doesn't look like the article is heavily trafficked by many editors and I think your edits could play a larger role in improving the material for the subject!