User:Leonardo8910/Fetal circulation/Samsonite23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Fetal circulation


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fetal circulation

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great background content with succinct flow between topics; I like how information follows chronological order from the fetal to newborn flow. It might be interesting to add content on complications in the transition, like meconium aspiration and Neonatal Respiratory Distress Syndrome. It would also be interesting to read about some of the medical tests physicians order to assess the neonatal transition. All of the information is very well-cited to other Wikipedia pages or scholarly articles.