User:LeonardoVillacis/Antarctic Cold Reversal/KenKardashin Peer Review

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LeonardoVillacis
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:LeonardoVillacis/Antarctic Cold Reversal
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Antarctic Cold Reversal

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

Maybe add a link to the "Holocene glacial retreat" article at "the most recent deglacial climate warming". Add a link to the "Before Present" page. I would list some of the most popular mechanisms, even if they are still debated and add a link to the "Atlantic Meridional Overturning Circulation article when you mention it.

Stratigraphic and Glacial evidences

I assume you're still adding citations to the rest of the article, but I would add them as you go so you don't lose where you got which from. Also a lot of your citations have incorrect dates, you can change these manually by clicking on the reference and putting in the correct date, often times it just cites year month which it won't accept for whatever reason.

Add a link to the "deglaciation" and "Ice Age" article. I would put the first sentences into the lead, as they are further background material.

Antarctica

The last sentence of "Stratigraphic and Glacial Evidence" mentions that the effects of ACR vary based on region so I would explain more about what changes occurred. For instance explain what negative deviations of deuterium signatures means, also add a link to the "Deuterium" article. Explain what a drop in CO2 means in terms of ecological changes.

South America

The last sentence of "Stratigraphic and Glacial Evidence" mentions that the effects of ACR vary based on region so I would explain more about what changes occurred. Rephrase this sentence to be slightly more clearer - "For example, pollen records show cold tolerant and alpine vegetation that after 12,500 years BP shifts to Rainforest vegetation." Like maybe - "After 12,500 years BP the pollen record shifts from cold tolerant and alpine vegetation to one that matches a rainforest".