User:LermonySnickers/A Curse So Dark And Lonely/WalkingAsGiants Peer Review

General info
LermonySnickers
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LermonySnickers/A_Curse_So_Dark_And_Lonely?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Well the good news is you've already written most of the article and made the publication box and made it compelling and accessible and clear. Ok, you have most of the surrounding stuff here and clearly you've read it, but your bibliography for how many sources you have is lacking and not detailed. However, given your article is the focus and not the bibliography, this shouldn't be too much of a hinderance as far as the actual article's execution is concerned.

Lead is good.

Content is good.

Tone and Balance is a little funny. I would just give it a once over to make sure it's formal and professional. But, I am trying to find faults in it when it seems very put together. I recommend reading aloud, there are a few times where your tenses jump around with the he said/she said of detailing the background. It's probably true to what happened but there is no thought to be thorough.

Organization is good, although the plot summary is rather extensive, although that could be the result of the young adult genre. I feel like rearranging it just slightly to fit the Wikipedia article design might benefit slightly as most articles do not begin with 'lead' but you're almost done and that would take 3.5 second to complete. You are currently missing an image for the book, if you need help importing one feel free to let me know, I figured out how to do part of it. I would love to see the completed project when you finish it in most likely a week.