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SA#21

The other C class article I found sources for is the Anehueser-Busch Brewery the first one is a New York times article I found on academic search complete

https://www-proquest-com.libproxy.siue.edu/docview/897097799/7199DAB385BD46F5PQ/1?accountid=13886

Fountain, Henry. “Side Trips in St. Louis: A Holiday for Eccentrics.” The New York times. 157.54214 (2008): n. pag. Print.

The second source I found was a research paper writeen by Paul Talpos

https://digital.lib.washington.edu/researchworks/handle/1773/36389     Paul Talpos

SA#20

The second source I found for the dorsal gunner stub article is from google scholar

http://www.livingwarbirds.com/heinkel-he-111.php

Academic Search Complete source

Head W, Tindle J. The B-32 Dominator Bomber and its Tragic History. Air Power History. 2020;67(1):35-43. Accessed June 23, 2022. https://search-ebscohost-com.libproxy.siue.edu/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=142484359&site=ehost-live&scope=site

SA #19

The article I chose to report on is the Dorsal gunner stub article. The guide I felt could be used as a reference for this stub article was the history guide. I feel this guide is appropriate due to the dorsal gunner was a key role in history during World War I & II arieal combat. As I stated the dorsal gunner was a key postion in aerial combat. With looking at the stub article on Wikipedia there is a lot of information missing. The article gives a general paragraph on a dorsal gunner but needs a lot more detail added. There are no specifics to the types of guns or how they were mounted to the aircraft.

A source I found in from the Academic Search Complete library that I feel could be used to improve the stub article.

Head W, Tindle J. The B-32 Dominator Bomber and its Tragic History. Air Power History. 2020;67(1):35-43. Accessed June 23, 2022. https://search-ebscohost-com.libproxy.siue.edu/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=142484359&site=ehost-live&scope=site

From Dr. Hildebrandt: These look great, Chris! Keep up with it.

SA #18

Dorsal gunner

Anheuser-Busch Brewery

Camp John Wise

SA#17
 * 1) The Start Class article I chose was Anheuser-Busch Brewery. I chose this article because I have been on the brewery tours several times. Upon reading what is already posted on the page I identified some simple errors such as the tours being free. I also feel that the page is very small and content could be easily added. Anheuser-Busch Brewery
 * 2) I know this article is a start class article because I selected it from the start class article link that was provided. Under the talk tab you can see the article is reated as start class mid-importance.
 * 3) In comparason to another brewery page one can notice right away that there is a lot of content missing for such a large historical building such as the Anheuser-Busch Brewery. While comparing it I noticed the that the article has no section content it is just a few paragraphs. The article could expand on the brewing process and products made at the facility. It could also inform on why the location was chosen in the first place due to it's access to the underground cave system to store the beer. The tours of the facility could be expanded upon as well. All the article states is free tours of the facility when in fact the tours are not free and they have 5 different options of tours. The article also mentions the clydesdale horses being kept at Grant's far but doesn't connect why this is.
 * 4) There are only four references called out within the reference section. Only half of the reference links are still valid and seem to be to generic pictures on the site and the document deeming the property a historic landmark.
 * 5) The Anehuser Busch Brewery article is the bare bones of the brewery's past. I feel this question goes hand in hand with question #3. The history of the brewery could be expanded on and made its own section. Major company acquistions and mergers could be another topic missing as well that was provided in my comparable wikipedia page. It could also use a category of the brewing process and building locations on the hisotric site.