User:Lewis.tristen/1837 Great Plains smallpox epidemic/GardOU Peer Review

General info
Lewis.tristen
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lewis.tristen/1837_Great_Plains_smallpox_epidemic?veacti
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):1837 Great Plains smallpox epidemic

Evaluate the drafted changes
The addition of a symptoms section is a great addition of the article, as that was critical information that the article was lacking. It might be a good idea to link the smallpox page in this symptoms section, in case readers are not familiar with the disease. However, I do notice the main article does this already in a few spots, so I suppose that may not be totally necessary. The expansion of the history section makes sense, and the sources seem to work well and seem credible. I would try to expand upon the symptoms section if possible. It may also be wise to add more sections, given the current article only have a few. The second paragraph of the symptoms may fit better in a new section, as it seems to relate more to spread and/or prevention attempts rather than symptoms of the disease. Overall, I think this is a great draft with plenty of good contributes to an article in need.