User:LexBrown070/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * María Elósegui


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is under a subdivision of Philosophers in the category of Philosophy. This particular philosopher is one that is modern and also a woman. The article is a bit short. The lead is almost non existent, however, there are photos of the subject as well as 4 subcategories to organize information. Some of the information can be expanded on. For example, it lists that she taught Philosophy, but there may be a content gap that can detail what course she taught or for how long.


 * Sources
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/40586343?Search=yes&resultItemClick=true&searchText=maria%20elosegui&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3FQuery%3Dmaria%2Belosegui%26acc%3Doff%26wc%3Don%26fc%3Doff%26group%3Dnone%26refreqid%3Dsearch%253A7e940c6bb23e0980ab6cffb030fe3a1d&ab_segments=0%2Fbasic_search_gsv2%2Fcontrol&refreqid=fastly-default%3A61759d613b6390ccffc36f5e1efad08d

Option 2

 * Article title
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:New_user_landing_page&page=Strict+determinism+%28philosophy%29


 * Article Evaluation
 * There is a big gap in a Philosophical theory called "Strict Determinism", There are many determinists and the topic itself is easy to define. If it were up to me, id create a few subcategories like "Philosophers who were Determinists" (and link them), "Strict Determinism" (As a definition, while also linking a page to regular "Determinism", "Works that refer to Strict Determinism", "Determinism in the ___ century", "Strict Determinism today" (which would detail the trend of the belief of Strict Determinism in the 21st century) etc. There is a lot I can add to this topic.


 * Sources
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/43895413?Search=yes&resultItemClick=true&searchText=Strict%20Determinism&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3FQuery%3DStrict%2BDeterminism%26acc%3Doff%26wc%3Don%26fc%3Doff%26group%3Dnone%26refreqid%3Dsearch%253A549a4fbd082cb356db5b6f08b2bb7b85&ab_segments=0%2Fbasic_search_gsv2%2Fcontrol&refreqid=fastly-default%3Ad63efaf8fc249bd78b0d44c7431f2112

Option 3

 * Article title
 * The Examined Life


 * Article Evaluation
 * Wikipedia details that the "Summary" section needs additional editing so I found that it was a page that could benefit from contribution. This is also a philosophic topic that I can add too. Writing about a book makes it easy to stay neutral. There is already information on the page but information is scarce. There is however, links for what is there.


 * Sources
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/24439123 (I would be adding to the summary page and this text has objective information for that section)