User:LexBrown070/The Examined Life/JSlater2119 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LexBrown070


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LexBrown070/The_Examined_Life?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Examined Life

Evaluate the drafted changes
At the moment of reviewing there were not many additions to the article aside from some sources and a line or two yet the information added seems relevant to the topic. The lead seems as if it could use a decent amount of information as right now it is pretty lacking giving a barebones look at what "the examined life" is. all of the sources included are good sources from what i can see most of them being from reputable places aswell the majority being fairly scholarly articles.

Response to Suggested Changes
JSlater: Thank you for your contributions to my feedback, unfortunately you have reviewed my work before I made any substantial changes to the page. There is certainly more than one line, apologies that you were not able to see that.


 * 1) "The lead seems as if it could use a decent amount of information..."


 * There is absolutely a goal to add information to all subsets of the article. In its current state, the lead does require more information. I suppose my initial focus was adding content elsewhere to ensure that information contributed to the lead is not also later mentioned in the article. Thank you for pointing that out!