User:LexReview/Christian Abraham Fleetwood/Hailrain Peer Review

Alexis was very detailed in their edit of this wikipedia page. I honestly don't know how they were able to get this much work in in so little time. I'm honestly so shocked.

I really appreciate that you made the new subsections in the article as it made the content easier to read in many cases. And I saw that you went back and changed the citation due to plagiarism, which was super cool. I know we talked about it during last class, but I didn't expect you to go back and change it given how little time we had left. Overall, I think you did an amazing job. Well done!

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