User:Lexdem/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Wanjiru Kinyanjui

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it is about the creator of Africa is a Woman's Name, which is a film that we watched in class. My preliminary thoughts are that the article could have much more detail, and seems to be fairly vague.

Evaluate the article
Lead section: This first sentence is effective, and tells readers who Kinyanjui is, where she is from, and what she is known for.

Content: I think that all of the content in this article is good, but much more content is needed. This provides a vague outline of Kinyanjui, but there is much more that could be said about her. It seems to exclusively focus on her work, and I think that there could be more about her as a person. I think that it could be broken into different sections, each pertaining to different parts of her life such as early life, education, personal life, etc.

Tone and balance: I feel like this article is written in a neutral tone and it unbiased.

Sources and references: The sources seem good and the links work.

Organization and writing quality: The article is clear and well-written with no grammatical errors.

Images and media: There are no images, but I do think that they could enhance the article. There could be a picture of Kinyanjui, and also some images of her films, to illustrate to the reader what the article is about.

Talk page discussion: There does not seem to be anything on the talk page.

Overall impressions: I think that this article is a great start for a biography of Wanjiru Kinyanjui. Its strengths are the depth in which it explores her body of work, but it could be improved by adding more information. I think that there is an opportunity to add a lot about her personal life and also the impact of her work on society.