User:Lexdem2/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Wanjiru Kinyanjui

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it is about the creator of Africa is a Woman's Name, a film we watched for class. So far, I think that the article could use some more detail and information.

Evaluate the article
Lead section: The lead section provides sufficient information for a brief description of Kinyanjui (where she is from, what she is known for) but could say a little more about her as a person.

Content: The content that exists within the article is relevant and up to date, but I feel as though it is a bit vague. I think that there could be more information that could be divided into a few sections. There could be more about her early life, personal life, education, and reception.

Tone and balance: I think that the article is written from a neutral point of view and is properly unbiased.

Sources and references: The sources seem good and the links work.

Organization and writing quality: The article seems to be clear and well-written, there are no grammatical errors.

Images and media: There are currently no images, but I think that the article could benefit from images of Kinyanjui and images of her work.

Talk page discussion: There is nothing on the article's talk-page. It is currently rated as stub-class, which makes sense because it seems to be an overview.

Overall impressions: The article is currently rated stub-class. I think that the article's biggest strength is that it provides a clear and unbiased overview of Wanjiru Kinyanjui with some good sources. It can be improved by adding more information to what is already there and potentially also enhancing it with some visual aid. I believe it is currently underdeveloped, but can be developed more.