User:Lexi10656/Pollution in California/Jenniferguerra514 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Lexi10656


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lexi10656/Pollution in California


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

As I read the article, I noticed that everything was well layed out and organized. She talks about three different topics that all relate and tie into each other. There is enough information about each topic that is well covered but maybe can use a bit more information. I like how even with the little information there, it gets straight to the topic and doesn't go off into other things that don't relate to it. Maybe you can include an imagine that related to this topic, but overall its a good article. Like I said its well layed out but a couple grammar mistakes.