User:Lexi Armstrong/Jefferson disk/Mallorybrennan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lexi Armstrong


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Jefferson disk


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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This article was composed very well, with a lot of the first section being Lexi's work. Lexi added some links and a lot of information to the summarizing paragraph. This paragraph explains very thoroughly how the Jefferson disk operates. It goes in detail about how the disk is set up and what each part does. It gives the sequential order of how this cypher system works, which is one of the most crucial parts of this page. External links were also added to reference other websites that are well versed on the topic. Other Wikipedia links were also added to add more information about certain key words, expanding on the detail of the device.