User:Lexie523/Chemical defense/Biology Brooke Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lexie


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lexie523/Chemical_defense?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chemical defense

Evaluate the drafted changes
It looks like you have a very broad scope of chemical defenses in marine invertebrates to cover with a lot of examples. With that many examples and that much information I have no doubt you will be able to write a good thorough article that describes chemical defenses in marine inverts. I would just caution against going into too much detail on too many examples or else the focus may begin to draw away from the main idea of chemical defense. As long as you keep chemical defense in the forefront of your writing the outline you have seems like it will be a good addition to the chemical defense page.