User:LexieP1997/Displacement (psychology)/Drtate22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LexieP1997


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LexieP1997/Displacement_(psychology)?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Displacement (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Like Liz said, the paraphrasing seems to be close to the original text. I do recommend the Lead can be expanded a little more to provide some background. Some additional sources can be helped. A few questions to guide you are: How did displacement come to be? What causes it? Otherwise, keep up the good work.