User:LexieYoungg/West Shamokin High School/Mbricker7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LexieYoungg


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LexieYoungg/West_Shamokin_High_School?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

You did a great job on your article draft. There aren't any errors or significant issues that I would alter. I would substitute features for items in the sentence "The beneficial items at West Shamokin include."I recommend adding the following sentence to the conclusion of your edits when you discuss the outside activities: "The outside facilities include a Fitness Center, a Baseball/Softball fields, a soccer practice field, and a turf football field are all among the outdoor amenities." Everything was expressed quite clearly in this essay, which you did an excellent job of expressing. I would think highly of West Shamokin High School if I came upon this article on Wikipedia. This post provides a good deal of information that answers all of my queries regarding this High School. You're familiarity with the controversy and the facts says a lot. After reading your article, I would definitely recommend this school to other people.