User:Lexieemegerr/Evaluate an Article

Evaluate an article
This is where you will complete your article evaluation. Please use the template below to evaluate your selected article.


 * Name of article: One Dad, Two Dads, Brown Dad, Blue Dads
 * Briefly describe why you have chosen this article to evaluate. There is very little written on this children's book. It is a fairly popular book, and I believe this wikipedia page should include more on it.

Lead

 * Guiding questions


 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? Yes
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? A bit overly detailed

Content

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article's content relevant to the topic? Yes
 * Is the content up-to-date? No
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? Yes

Tone and Balance

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article neutral? Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? Yes
 * Does the article attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? no

Sources and References

 * Guiding questions


 * Are all facts in the article backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? yes
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? should be more thorough
 * Are the sources current? no
 * Check a few links. Do they work?yes

Organization

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? no, its a little wordy
 * Does the article have any grammatical or spelling errors? yes, a few
 * Is the article well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? yes

Images and Media

 * Guiding questions


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? yes, one
 * Are images well-captioned? no
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? yes
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? yes

Checking the talk page

 * Guiding questions


 * What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic? questioning its notability and placement in wikipedia
 * How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects? stub-class, low importance
 * How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class? They talked down on it, while in class, we talked about the importance of this book.

Overall impressions

 * Guiding questions


 * What is the article's overall status? poor
 * What are the article's strengths? it is very simplistic and concise
 * How can the article be improved? Much more information and reasoning behind writing the book/how it affected the general public
 * How would you assess the article's completeness - i.e. Is the article well-developed? Is it underdeveloped or poorly developed? underdeveloped

Optional activity

 * Choose at least 1 question relevant to the article you're evaluating and leave your evaluation on the article's Talk page. Be sure to sign your feedback

with four tildes — ~


 * Link to feedback: