User:Lexxdavv/Dagaare language/Hoh34 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lexxdavv, TramTrimTrom, Mary.martorano


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Dagaare language


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The most noticeable thing was that it was organized in great detail about grammar. Pronouns, word order, and verb phrases were presented along with examples, making it easy to understand. Reference documents are almost recent, but some are old. One thing to supplement is that there is no content in the lead part, so I think you can summarize and add important contents. It is composed of neutral content and does not try to persuade readers. The contents written are easy to read and clearly written.