User:Lexxdavv/Dagaare language/Marlem J. Peer Review

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TramTrimTrom


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 * Dagaare language

Evaluate the drafted changes
Based on what I saw, I think it's good so far since the basics of the Dagaare phonology seem to be there for the most part. It is well organized in a chart, which makes it legible. Adding some more context as to how the phonology works would be a good idea because it can give the reader more insight and it'll be helpful when it comes to readers trying to pronounce or trying to figure out exactly what letters/characters in Dagaare sound like.