User:Lexxdavv/Dagaare language/Mmysli Peer Review

General info

 * I am reviewing the Daagare Sandbox draft.

(Reviewed by: mmysli)

(Work by: Lexxdavv, TramTrimTom, and mary.martorano)


 * Link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lexxdavv/Dagaare_language?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article: Dagaare language
 * Link to the current version of the article: Dagaare language
 * Link to the current version of the article: Dagaare language

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Sandbox doesn't give much of a lead when involving the consonants and vowels of Dagaare in terms of how the vowels toned vowels work. A way to clarify this could possibly be giving examples of words with similar consonants. The writers did a great job in organizing the vowels and consonants into a comprehensive chart, it's very well organized and easily read!

They also cited their source correctly by attaching it to a sentence, I just think they could possibly include more information about vowels and consonants in that sentence. I think this group is certainly heading in the right direction and with some research, they'll make the current Wiki Article even better.