User:Lexxdavv/Dagaare language/Tytygo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lexxdavv


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lexxdavv/Dagaare_language?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dagaare language

Lead
The lead seems a bit bare, and could probably use more general information. As it stands, though, it works.

Content
Content-wise, the article seems very informative and factual. It seems phonology is heavily documented; however, there is practically no information in terms of the people, culture and history associated with the language. In terms of what was changed, the information added seems to fit and work within the article.

Organization
The article organizes the information into many easy-to-read tables, which organizes the information nicely. One minor suggestion would be to maybe have some additional. simplified explanations of the concepts presented for the laymen of wikipedia.

Overall Impressions
The article is well written, and the contributions made fit within the article. They seem to have used credible sources and used unbiased information, and it is neatly organized into tables.