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Assignment 17

Which stub did I choose? Bachelor's degree or higher https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bachelor%27s_degree_or_higher

Why did I choose it? The article has nothing other than the definition of what a Bachelor's degree is and I thought it would be easy for my first article. I also thought it would be easy to find other things to put into the article since Bachelor's degrees are so popular in todays society.

How did I know it was a stub? I found it in the list of stubs that were sent out, in addition it only had one paragraph which didn't seem sufficient.

What are some missing or underdeveloped parts? The whole article is very underdeveloped, it basically only has a definition. To spruce up this article things like statics of how many colleges are in the world and what kind of Bachelor's degrees are offered, as well as how a Bachelor's degree in the United States differs from a Bachelor's degree in another country. The article could also include things like how a Bachelor's degree can change the kind of job you get and when going to a 4 year University become so popular. All in all, this article could include much more than it does now.

References? The one reference takes you to census.gov and it doesn't state any of the information that is included in the article.

Comparison In comparison to a more developed article, this basically only has the definition of a Bachelor's degree when it could include the history, statics, structure, types, duration, etc.

Assignment 18

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bachelor%27s_degree_or_higher

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Template:Punk-music-stub

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Money_worship

Assignment 19

My source: Bachelor's degree or higher

Appropriate guides: None of the guides really go with this topic, but if I had to choose one I think sociology would be a good idea. It seems to include history/addressing the other side, and the context. All which could be applied to this article.

What I could add: When comparing this article to an article about masters degree I realized I could add a lot of things. I would add headers which include history, structure of bachelor programs in different countries, and the duration of different types of programs. This article could use a little bit of anything, maybe I would also include things like cost/loans as a sub header.

LoveJoy article I could use: Zarifa, David, et al. “What’s Taking You So Long? Examining the Effects of Social Class on Completing a Bachelor’s Degree in Four Years.” Sociology of Education, vol. 91, no. 4, Oct. 2018, pp. 290–322, doi:10.1177/0038040718802258.

Assignment 20

“Degrees Are UP–and DOWN.” Presidency, vol. 19, no. 3, Summer 2016, p. 6. EBSCOhost, search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=117619317&site=ehost-live&scope=site.

Emmons, William R., et al. “Is College Still Worth It? The New Calculus of Falling Returns.” Review (00149187), vol. 101, no. 4, 2019 4th Quarter 2019, pp. 297–329. EBSCOhost, doi:10.20955/r.101.297-329.

Assignment 21 Punk rock

Compiled by Joseph Edwin. "How it all started". New Straits Times (Malaysia), January 22, 1997. advance-lexis-com.libproxy.siue.edu/api/document?collection=news&id= urn:contentItem:3W31-4850-00K1-P4PR-00000-00&context=1516831. Accessed June 25, 2020.

“The Fashion Punk Paradox.” Inventing Arguments, by Andrew Hyde, Cengage Learning, 2016.

Assignment 22

Why did I choose my sources? What can they improve? Both of my sources give an overview of what punk rock is and "The Fashion Punk Paradox" which is the article we read in class also discusses how punk rock has changed over time. Since this article has nothing, I figured a good start would be to add a broad definition.

Adding a new section? I will have to add a new section considering this article is empty, I will add a small section including what punk rock is and a small part about the history.

Draft:

Defintion
Punk music made its entrance into pop music in 1976 with much debate over where it actually began. The songs of punk music are often political themed with a rebellious side, and most often included a fast tempo. Many band members were amateurs that had very little work in music. Band members and fans of punk music often wore dark and ragged style clothes with crazy hair and piercings.