User:Lg105/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Barbara W. Newell

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Newell is one of Wellesley College's past presidents. Her contribution to the college was significant as was her career in higher education. My preliminary impression of the page is that it looks good and organized, though a little bare compared to other Wikipedia pages I've seen.

Evaluate the article
After evaluating the article, my group and I determined that the writing and organization is good so far. However, there could be improvements through more reliable citations and references. Moreover, we noticed some unnecessary words (mostly adjectives) that could be removed to make the tone more neutral. One thing I noticed was that there were no images or media. I'm curious to see if that's something we can contribute to the page.