User:Lgarmon4/Cross-cultural psychiatry/Tammytrinh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lgarmon4


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lgarmon4/Cross-cultural psychiatry/Bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cross-cultural psychiatry

Evaluate the drafted changes
The bibliography is pretty detailed and well written for the most part. I would change some grammar and punctuation issues here and there. As well as go into more detail of what exactly is Cross-Cultural Psychiatry is. I understand that this is a very broad and pretty difficult topic to write about. For the most part this person's has a pretty good understanding of their own topic and I'm sure they will do well on this project!