User:Lhanley27/Francesco Schettino/Tpk3420 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

tpk3420


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lhanley27/Francesco_Schettino?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Francesco Schettino
 * Francesco Schettino

Evaluate the drafted changes
Only has one sentence started. Most of the existing article is well drafted, so I am curious to see where the edits will go or what additions will be made.