User:Lhardy3/Oretha Castle Haley Boulevard/Miss.Anieya Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(User:Lhardy3/Oretha Castle Haley Boulevard)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lhardy3/Oretha Castle Haley Boulevard


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Lhardy3/Oretha Castle Haley Boulevard

Evaluate the drafted changes
The structuring of the article looks very put together. Everything is labeled nicely but there are a coupe things missing such as a picture and an infobox. The lead into the article is worded very well but could use a bit more information. The lead could also use more description also. The history section of the article is very well structured and the writer did a good job at keeping everything neutral so far. I like how in depth you went with the history of Oretha Castle Haley Boulevard and its demographical history. The section labeled Oretha Castle Haley could have easily been mixed in with the history portion because separating it seems a little unnecessary. I like how you did a present day section, that was a good idea and it'll help structure mine that way whenever we come across editing. Lastly, I would just ask you to add an infobox, include a picture, and maybe combine Oretha Castle Haley with History.