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Mal de ojo is "a concept widely found in Mediterranean cultures and elsewhere in the world. Mal de ojo is a Spanish phrase translated into English as "evil eye." Children are especially at risk. Symptoms include fifful sleep, crying without apparent cause, diarrhea, vomiting, and fever in a child or infant. Sometimes adults (especially females) have the condition."

THE "A" IN THE FIRST QUOTE SHOULD NOT BE CAPITALIZED.

The condition of Mal de ojo is known as "evil eye" in English. Some adults, especially females, and children are at risk for this condition. Some of the symptoms include fever in infants and children, fifful sleep, diarrhea, vomiting, an crying without a reason. The phrase is Spanish. Most commonly evil eye is found primarily in Mediterranean cultures.

YOU NEED TO END THE ITALICS AFTER "EVIL EYE" BECAUSE THE ENTIRE PARAGRAPH IS ITALICIZED RIGHT NOW. ALSO, "CONDITION" IS SPELLED INCORRECTLY. YOU ALSO LIST INFORMATION IN THIS PARAGRAPH THAT YOU'VE ALREADY LISTED, SO PARTS ARE REDUNDANT.

Mal de ojo, or "evil eye", is a supernatural belief that has been documented and studied more in some countries than in others. These studies have shown that the belief in evil eye is more common today in all kinds of culture and socio-economic groups. As a result the belief of evil eye has been passed down from generation to generation in different cultures and practices within society.

COULD EACH PARAGRAPH DEAL WITH A DIFFERENT ASPECT OF THE ILLNESS? YOU MIGHT NEED MORE SOURCES, BUT THEY WOULD ILLUMINATE YOUR TOPIC AND KEEP YOU FROM SAYING THE SAME THING OVER AND OVER.

We can gain more knowledge and understanding the term evil eye if we study what the term means in differnt languages and cultures. The nucleas of people that believe in the evil eye are in India and the Mediterranean. In these areas eye color is said to be a determining factor in having this condition. It is thought that blue-eyed people have evil eye, but the fact is that not a lot of the population have this eye color. Although the treatment and cure for this condition is fairly simple it may not be belived my most. It involves eggs in the face and body of both the victim and water from the victims mouth into the mouth of the person who cast the spell of evil eye. In conclusion, because of the beliefs of cultures and society the "evil eye" syndrome will be passed on for more generations to come.