User:Lhart808/Cymbal Bubble Snail/Mj291 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Lhart808


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lhart808/Cymbal_Bubble_Snail?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way?

The article is clear on species, habitat, description of how it looks, how it reproduces, and what it eats. For example, in the description, it says the Cymbal Bubble Snail is recognizable due to its teal-green hue and sprays of vibrant orange polka dots. You can visualize what it would look like in your mind while reading it. I also liked the scientific placement chart. You can easily see what placement it is in, and nicely organized.


 * 1) What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?

I would move the scientific placement chart where the overview is. It would look much better and line up with the other sections below. It is like the table of contents in the textbooks we use.


 * 1) What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?

The most important thing would be correcting some spelling—for example, simulanuous --> simultaneous, herbivours --> herbivorous.


 * 1) Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your  own article? Let them know!

The scientific placement chart was pretty eye-popping. I think I'll include one too.

'''Hey! Thank you for this feedback! I edited my article to match some of your recommendations and I appreciate you pointing out the spelling errors. I got my inspiration of scientific placements from another well developed wiki article, glad you could use the inspiration to your advantage! Have a lovely week!'''