User:Lhi1001/Mendelian inheritance/Ard1174 Peer Review

General info
Lhi1001
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Lhi1001/Mendelian inheritance
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Mendelian inheritance

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The history section where you add citation looks great, the citations you added seem like improvements!
 * The new section looks good as well, the example is well written out. If possible I would add images to help give a visual view of what the diagrams look like (both the Punnett square and pedigree )
 * Flow to paragraph to paragraph is easy to follow
 * At the end of the pedigree paragraph there's a typo saying "eb" not be
 * You can define or have a link to the definition of heterozygous / homozygous genotype for people who may not know the subject as well