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Wikipedia Assignment 1: Prostate Cancer Staging https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prostate_cancer_staging

Danielle Robinson 10090530, Meghan McPhie 05292113, Emma Spence 10169090, Louis Huynh 10098673, Wasim Syed 10131655, Madison Price 20045370

1. Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you? 2. Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? 3. Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? 4. Check a few citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article? 5. Is each fact referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are they secondary sources? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted? 6. Is any information out of date (within 5 years from the publication date)? Is anything missing that could be added? 7. Check out the Talk page of the article. What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic? 8. Outline the article as it stands. What do you plan to contribute? Sources considered for use:
 * The section titled “Risk groups” does not fit well with the information in that paragraph; it may have been better to split this section into “Risk Groups” and “Treatment” or “Treatment by Staging” or name the entire paragraph “Treatment Based on Risk Group”
 * All the acronyms are distracting; perhaps they could be presented in a more straightforward way, or more clearly defined in one place at the start of the article.
 * The article appears to be presented in a fairly factual and neutral tone; however, the article does make some claims that are not supported with references. For example, stating that one staging method is more commonly used in comparison to another method, but not backing this up with empirical evidence.
 * This article would be strengthened by the inclusion of more references to support the claims, or to substantiate that these are in fact the most common/up to date prostate cancer staging methods.
 * The major staging systems for prostate cancer are discussed in the article, but the article is over-representing the information from that one particular source. The use of other credible sources to support the content in the article would improve the WikiPage quality. Furthermore, the article places too much emphasis on the TNM staging relative to the Whitmore-Jewett stage because of an unsupported claim that the latter is not commonly used by physicians.
 * There is only 1 citation that is from a book published in 2006, titled Contemporary Issues in Prostate Cancer: A Nursing Perspective. The link to this reference works, however, the 11 year difference is likely significant for prostate cancer topics in particular, as this field has had many advances in knowledge with attention devoted to it in research in recent years. Also, textbooks are not considered to be the most valued source of information in terms of evidence based medicine based on the “Hierarchy of Evidence Pyramid.” To add, the article claims that the TNM staging is commonly used as per the 6th edition guidelines of the American Joint Committee of Cancer. However, this is false as the 7th edition has already been implemented and widely used compared to the 6th edition guidelines. As such, the Wiki Article could benefit from a recent systematic review performed within the last 5 years to increase the accuracy and validity of the information.
 * Only one source is provided, and this source is only referenced one time in the article. This source is a textbook, “Contemporary Issues in Prostate Cancer: A Nursing Perspective,” which  is a neutral secondary source. The article would benefit from having more statements referenced individually to at least substantiate that more than one source confirms the information presented in the article.
 * As only one citation is provided, many statements require references throughout our article - a list of which would be too lengthy to include in this assignment confined to two pages.
 * The referenced source for the article was published in 2006.
 * The article could benefit from more internal Wikipedia links, for example a link to a Prostate-Specific Antigen (PSA) article, as PSA is an important part of tracking prostate cancer development that is alluded to in the article on many occasions.
 * Some systematic reviews could be included to speak to the effectiveness or use in practice of these staging scales.
 * The article could have delved deeper into the prognoses for each stage, since it states at the beginning of the article that this is what cancer staging is for (however, reference question 7 for Talk Page concerns/discussions about doing this).
 * According to the talk page, this article has been rated as Start-Class and of High-Importance.
 * The majority of the conversations that have taken place on this page are from 2005. Other than addressing basic concerns such as the appropriate title for the article, avoiding copyright violation, or highlighting the use of outdated staging guidelines, there have been conversations regarding the inclusion of a section on prognosis related to prostate cancer staging. The final consensus was to exclude that section because it may cause undue stress to men with prostate cancer reading about their prognosis, and because prognostic information can best be contextualized and applied in individual circumstances using a physician’s clinical judgment.
 * The article starts with an overview of prostate cancer staging and mentions the two common schemes used to stage prostate cancer.
 * Next, the article outlines the two different approaches for staging: TNM staging and Whitmore-Jewett staging.
 * Finally, the article outlines some of the risk groups
 * We plan to contribute the following:
 * 1) Addition of up-to-date references/sources to support some of the claims outlined in the article (e.g., systematic reviews)
 * 2) Reviewing claims and ensuring they are accurate and supported by current research on the topic
 * 3) Addition of pictures or diagrams
 * 4) More internal hyperlinks to major terms for more background information (e.g., a link to prostate cancer, PSA)
 * 5) Possible addition of new sections depending on what is found during a review of current literature.

Emma Spence 10169090

Wener, Mark H., Muller, Charles H., & Dufour, D. Robert (2014). Male Genital Tract: Prostate Cancer. In Michael Laposata (Ed.), The Diagnosis of Disease in the Clinical Laboratory (2nd ed.). New York, NY” McGraw-Hill. http://accessmedicine.mhmedical.com.proxy.queensu.ca/content.aspx?sectionid=60777734&bookid=1069&jumpsectionID=68448741&Resultclick=2#1104504305.

''Provides information on integration of PSA levels into staging of prostate cancer in conjunction with TNM staging. Discusses limitations of using PSA for screening, and advantages of using PSA to monitor progression and recurrence of cancer.''

Wasim Syed 10131655

Catalá, V., Laucirica, O., Hernandez, J., Algaba, F., Vilanova, J. C., & Sanguedolce, F. (2018). Prostate Cancer and MRI: Local Staging. In J. C. Vilanova, V. Catalá, F. Algaba, & O. Laucirica (Eds.), Atlas of Multiparametric Prostate MRI: With PI-RADS Approach and Anatomic-MRI-Pathological Correlation (pp. 115–142). Cham: Springer International Publishing. https://doi.org/10.1007/978-3-319-61786-2_6.

''Book Chapter describes Tumour, Node, Metastatis (TNM) classification as recommended by the International Union Against Cancer (7th Edition). It further describes how risk groups are classified and which treatments may be offered for the respective risk groups.''

Meghan McPhie 05292113

Prostate Cancer Treatment. (2016). Retrieved October 09, 2017, from https://www.cancer.gov/types/prostate/patient/prostate-treatment-pdq#section/_120

''This source provides information on the steps taken to determine if cancer cells have spread within the prostate or to other parts of the body after a prostate cancer diagnosis. It further discusses the ways in which cancer may spread in the body and the four stages that are used for prostate cancer.''

Louis Huynh 10098673

Ozyigit, G., & Selek, U. (2017). Principles and Practice of Urooncology: Radiotherapy, Surgery and Systemic Therapy. Cham: Springer.

''This source provides the most recent edition of the American Joint Committee on Cancer (AJCC) guidelines for TNM staging of prostate cancer. It also provides another guideline for prostate cancer staging not mentioned in the current Wikipedia article, which is the National Comprehensive Cancer Network (NCCN) guidelines.''

Madison Price 20045370

Wu, D., Ni, J., Beretov, J., Cozzi, P., Willcox, M., Wasinger, V., … Li, Y. (2017). Urinary biomarkers in prostate cancer detection and monitoring progression. Critical Reviews in Oncology/Hematology, 118, 15–26. http://doi.org/10.1016/j.critrevonc.2017.08.002

''This source examines the use of urinary biomarkers as an alternative to other, more invasive prostate cancer biomarkers. The review finds evidence that urinary biomarkers can become a powerful clinical diagnostic and staging tool with the collaboration of clinical researchers and physicians. Through screening, urinary biomarkers could potentially decrease the time between prostate cancer onset and symptom onset/diagnosis.''