User:LiLonghao/Cultivation theory/HebinCMN2160 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lilonghao


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User talk:LiLonghao/Cultivation theory
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cultivation theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think the evaluator's suggestion is very clear and pertinent because he lists all kinds of useful reference links. This not only provides the author with more relevant information, but also provides reader with effective academic resources that related to that topic.