User:LiamWooten/Herbert A. Simon/Ksihapanya Peer Review

General info
I am reviewing Liam Wooten's work.
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:LiamWooten/Herbert A. Simon
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Herbert A. Simon

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Liam Wooten's contribution to the article on Herbert A. Simon is commendable, providing relevant and up-to-date information on the person. The content primarily focuses on Simon's honors in life and his significant contributions to artificial intelligence. The draft maintains a neutral tone, presenting facts without bias or attempts to persuade the reader in anyway
 * The organization of the article is well-structured, given the amount of content provided, and Liam effectively uses bold text to denote added information to the article. The inclusion of a citation from a journal adds credibility to the information presented, indicating a reliable source. However, it is advisable that Liam should think about incorporating additional sources to further enhance the depth and completeness of the article.
 * One area for improvement could be the addition of more content to ensure a comprehensive overview of Herbert A. Simon's life and work. Liam could try exploring other aspects of Simon, such as personal life, education, or additional professional achievements. By adding more information and edits it could contribute to a more holistic understanding of the subject. Additionally, Liam could include  images or media to enhance the visual appeal and engagement of the article.
 * In conclusion, while Liam Wooten has crafted a well-written and factual draft, there is room for improvement through the addition of more sources, content, and potentially multimedia elements to create a more comprehensive and visually appealing article on Herbert A. Simon.