User:LibraryKat95/Ibi Zoboi/Maureensq19 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? LibraryKat95, Gruzsa, Mgrone
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Gruzsa/598 Sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? No, they could help add one
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? no
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? no
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? no
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? n/a

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? yes
 * Is the content added up-to-date? yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? Could add a few more details about the Anacaona workshop and her newest book. These felt a bit incomplete. I know My Life as an Ice Cream Sandwich has some plot elements like space and references to Star Trek that are worth mentioning.

Content evaluation
Could be a lot more substantial.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? no
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? no
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? no

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? yes, though there is a source missing on 15 after the info about her newest book.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? yes
 * Are the sources current? yes
 * Check a few links. Do they work? yes, but make sure to fix 15

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? yes
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? no
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? yes

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? yes
 * What are the strengths of the content added? The added content really rounds out some of the details of the author's life. I like the bit about Anacaona because it adds more about what Zoboi cares about. I think that's why I want more details.
 * How can the content added be improved? You can also add that she edited Black Enough: Stories of Being Young & Black in America, a teen anthology from 2019.

Overall evaluation
Adding a lead with a general statement about Zoboi would be helpful, and adding a few more details would really enhance the page, though what you have added is a good addition.