User:Lif704/Millie Lawson Bethell Paxton/Isabellahinds Peer Review

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Lif704 & Malgathuru


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 * User:Lif704/Millie Lawson Bethell Paxton


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I really enjoyed reading through your article - Millie Paxton accomplished so much in her lifetime, so I am excited that she will finally be recognized in this space! The content is clearly unbiased, the format looks consistent, and the information is organized in a way that is easy to understand and follow. I do believe you are missing the lead and references sections, however, and more information in each subsection could be useful for the reader to understand her life outside of her most notable accomplishments. Once you add some primary and secondary sources, though, I think your article will be super great!