User:Lif704/Millie Lawson Bethell Paxton/Lps2021 Peer Review

General info
Overall I really loved what you guys did so far! I think you did a really great job at hyperlinking to other wiki pages which will help add traffic to the page!

Evaluate the drafted changes
Some notes:

I dont see a citations section at the bottom of the wikipedia page so I think that would be important thing to add. I also do not see any citations in general on the page (only hyperlinks), so this is super important! It is crucial to get those foot note citations in here. If you can add a photo I think that would be amazing but no necessary.