User:Lif704/Millie Lawson Bethell Paxton/Taylormapstone Peer Review

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Lif704


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 * User:Lif704/Millie Lawson Bethell Paxton
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The Lead looks good! Its is very concise and gives a great amount of information.

Content: The content is very well presented and well researched. The research done into Paxton's life is thorough and precise with examples of her previous work with women's groups and her leadership positions. It might be good to try to blend the information in the Civic leadership and political activism section.

Tone & Balance: I think the tone is neutral. Great representation of all aspects of Paxton's life.

Sources & References: There needs to be more sources and references added. I can tell you have a lot of good information but no way to back it up yet. But, there are a lot of great links to the information added so far.

Organization: Pretty good organization. There needs to be a bit more blending of information of the articles but after a quick blend, the organization will be great.

Overall Impressions: Overall, you all did a great job! While there are a few things to add and a bit of blending to be done, I think that the information you have is great as long as you can back it up with sources. It is hard to find a lot of information on these women but you all did a great job of including a lot of information of Paxton's life.