User:LightPear/Calcitroic acid/Indigohippo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lightpear


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LightPear/Calcitroic_acid?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Calcitroic acid

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Neutral tone
 * Movement of the study to a different heading since it does not seem relevant to the section
 * Detailed, citations are by peer-reviewed databases which offer neutrality and credibility