User:Lightfootcrytpkeeper/Tomb of Seti I/Wikieditor1685 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lightfootcryptkeeper


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Tomb of Seti I
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Student drafted directly on the site, so the link is the same as above.
 * Student drafted directly on the site, so the link is the same as above.

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:


 * There may need to be a citation for the first sentence
 * Great job, description makes me want to finish reading the article

Clarity:


 * Maybe a subsection or link to a page specifically about Seti I? I got a bit confused reading about the tomb with little mention of its namesake
 * Break up the second subsection into two smaller ones if possible

Coverage Balance:


 * Great timeline
 * Possibly add current updates of the tomb? Where it resides, tourism, etc if possible would be good adds!

Neutrality:


 * No issues with this, neutral tone through the whole article

References:


 * Beautiful sources, great adds!
 * Possibly add an image to the Design and Decoration Section
 * Make sure that if something is not your original thought that it is cited

Spelling/Grammar etc:


 * "Links" in the External Links heading should be capitalized
 * "Conservation" in the second heading should be capitalized

Additional comments:


 * Great job with this! Love the contributions, sources, and artwork.